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As you read over the material, please note the improvements the student has made since the 4 and 6 source essays.
Please answer the following questions:
1. In the introduction, what is the thesis statement for this paper?
2. Compare this draft to the Six-Source Essay. Choose three improvements that the student made in the Multi-Source Essay and list them.
3. What are some suggestions about the relationship between animal communication and human language?
4. What limitations can you identify in this student draft? How would you improve it?
5. As a result of having read this article, please write a few sentences about what you might have learned about synthesizing sources.